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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Tue Sep 18, 2012 5:02 am

    Right well when you want to write good quality lore bring it to the table....because I sure think that my characters are more realistic that yours.....lol!
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    Post by Shkar Tue Sep 18, 2012 9:31 am

    ViralEnsign_ wrote:Right well when you want to write good quality lore bring it to the table....because I sure think that my characters are more realistic that yours.....lol!

    Our characters are immortal "zombies". I find the ability to sew on body parts more likely than being able to cough up a scythe silly
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    Post by Seth Winternight Tue Sep 18, 2012 4:19 pm

    Shkar, in saying you didn't want to argue his lore, the fact is you're arguing about his lore. Your logic is flawed and you must back down sir.
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    Post by Shkar Tue Sep 18, 2012 5:46 pm

    Seth Winternight wrote:Shkar, in saying you didn't want to argue his lore, the fact is you're arguing about his lore. Your logic is flawed and you must back down sir.

    I asked a question on a point that seemed hilarious in my thoughts and was debating the logistics behind it. I wasn't so much "arguing the lore" as I was "bantering about how it happens".

    Instead of saying, "OMG, that laser would have gone through that wall, I demand you change it," I was saying, "So, the laser sticks to the wall like its caught in fly-paper? Strange!"
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    Post by White Knight Wulf Wed Sep 19, 2012 7:11 am

    And u guys wondwer y lore never gets finished and this is y sumone derails the thread n everything. Oh n whoever does lore next Wulf n Moon still have their normal builds mura and shield with pyros for wulf and Gravelord sword n shield wit sum pyro for moon
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Wed Sep 19, 2012 7:12 am

    Will add them in Wulf!
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    Post by cloudyeki Fri Sep 21, 2012 3:53 am

    Plagius: Stardate... uh.... thursday.... We've been pinned in the romance novel section by a large group of archers. Bear Force One has lost ground as well to the golems, as well as most going into hibernation in the crystal caves or falling to their deaths while rolling in said hibernation. I'm afraid we can not progress to the designated drop zone in the scifi section with the rest of the GS. I pray that Nito will send a miracle any moment, but till then, we will hold fast til we can think of something.
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    Post by DoughGuy Fri Sep 21, 2012 10:58 am

    The ranks of knights held their breath as the elevator slowly pulled its way up. The sound of the lift pulling itself up resembled the song of the Pisaca’s and every Knight winced hearing it. Whoever had ripped it out must have done damage to the gears too and slowed the entire lift. Finally the first pale heads emerged over the lip of the landing. The bodies they belonged to rose into full view, and as they emerged the knights froze as one. Before them the 100 men of the first defence squad stood, slowly swaying, their armour and weapons clinking as they moved. They looked the same as they had while alive apart from the deathly pallor of their skin.

    The lift clicked into place, the dreadful screeching stopped and the first corpse warrior stepped off the lift. The knights remained frozen. Even Oscar, hand raised to call down a rain of heavy bolts, found himself rooted in place by the horror of the scene. Sweat broke on his forehead, the thought of firing on his own, even dead as they were, was something he could not bear.

    Necromancy on this scale and had never been seen by the knights before, and Avrik knew it.

    The final corpses pushed their way off the elevator and the horde swallowed the distance between itself and the Knight’s line. Oscar’s hand trembled in fear as the knights began to retreat rather than fight their former comrades. As the corpses advanced the knights retreated equal distance ensuring the2 forces would not meet. I must do it, Oscar’s thoughts raged, I cannot let this beat me.

    “Oscar!” a voice rang out. He looked up to see Aldthre staring at him in desperation. NOW!

    FIRE!” he yelled throwing his fist forward. Shaken from their despair by his voice the crews of the ballistae swung into action. Bolts rained down into the advancing army, crushing bone and violating flesh. But the wall of dead kept coming, wounds that could kill men in full plate simply
    slowing them.

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    As the knights stood frozen in horror the lift flew back down to ground level. Unburdened by the weight of so many placed upon it, it glided back down to the waiting Gravesworn without noise. It gently stopped at the lower level, the gates chiming open merrily.

    Drake strode onto the lift with another 150 Gravesworn “Our advance force won’t hold them for long. We need to reinforce them fast. Be ready to bring it straight back down.”

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    Up above a hundred Gravesworn under the leadership of Avrik snuck out from behind the corpse wall. With the knights attention focussed entirely upon the dead they had no trouble making it into the dark embrace of the shadows. As the corpses continued their march of terror they slithered from shadow to shadow until they faced the Knight’s flank.

    “Oscar!” The warning drove Avrik deeper into his shadow. He looked around fearing they had been spotted, but the Knight’s attention was still on the corpses. Then who? Looking up he spotted Lethard among the ranks, calling his warning to Oscar. Avrik frowned, evidently his idea had come back to haunt him. Swearing he turned his attention back to his own men, making sure his hand was ready to strike.

    FIRE!” Oscar screamed his order.

    Smiling Avrik gave his own “Kill them all.”

    The hand reached out and grabbed the knight’s flank.
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Fri Sep 21, 2012 8:32 pm

    Nice well written Dough? Should I write Avrik's demise?
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    Post by Serious_Much Fri Sep 21, 2012 8:43 pm

    lol, your lore isn't even finished and you have to rethink the whole ending...

    screw the gravesworn messing up the lore lol!
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    Post by DoughGuy Fri Sep 21, 2012 9:18 pm

    ViralEnsign_ wrote:Nice well written Dough? Should I write Avrik's demise?
    You can write it now but it wont be posted for awhile.
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    Post by cloudyeki Mon Sep 24, 2012 10:33 pm

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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Tue Sep 25, 2012 1:12 am

    Lore writing does take time Eki....and with dough needing to do reports or whatever he does..... you get side tracked....remember the painted world lore.....
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    Post by DoughGuy Tue Sep 25, 2012 3:31 am

    Which still isnt finished!
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Tue Sep 25, 2012 4:05 am

    Fine Ill complete the last section and post all 7 of them but I wont until the whole thing is done, I dont want to get Shkar's hopes up.
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    Post by Shkar Tue Sep 25, 2012 9:15 am

    ViralEnsign_ wrote:Fine Ill complete the last section and post all 7 of them but I wont until the whole thing is done, I dont want to get Shkar's hopes up.

    Oh, I gave up hope a long time ago. I just like to tease you about it.
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Tue Sep 25, 2012 8:16 pm

    Shkar wrote:
    ViralEnsign_ wrote:Fine Ill complete the last section and post all 7 of them but I wont until the whole thing is done, I dont want to get Shkar's hopes up.

    Oh, I gave up hope a long time ago. I just like to tease you about it.

    If i said That today id' write the next piece and PM it to you personally would you be happy?
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    Post by DoughGuy Tue Sep 25, 2012 8:17 pm

    Update coming tomorrow or the day after. Or maybe even today if you guys are super lucky.
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    Post by DoughGuy Thu Sep 27, 2012 10:42 am

    The First Line Breaks:
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Thu Sep 27, 2012 4:02 pm

    NIce I like it!
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    Post by White Knight Wulf Thu Sep 27, 2012 7:37 pm

    Doughy dnt forget Wulf and Moon
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    Post by DoughGuy Thu Sep 27, 2012 8:07 pm

    I wont. This is only the opening, individuals start showing up next piece.
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    Post by Spurgun Mon Oct 01, 2012 9:16 am

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    Post by Jansports Mon Oct 01, 2012 10:05 am

    Spurgun wrote:

    Interesting. I think I'd have to agree.
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    Post by twilightwarwolf Mon Oct 01, 2012 12:17 pm

    this is awesome keep it up!!!!

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