sorry for being off topic, but "Go Beyond Death" is really dumb. I hope that is not what had won on facebook. You never go beyond Death in Dark souls. You die to become undead then pop humanity to become human again. If anything your visiting Death every time you die never going beyond it. If my character grew wings and I was a angel then yea, I went beyond death.
Umm, just one word of caution tho. . .I'd check for spelling mistakes, there's one particular freudian slip in the 'atmospheric dungeon' line. . .i'd make sure you dont spell 'encounter' wrong. . .if you catch my drift?