My Arena build please rate and comment

http://mugenmonkey.com/darksouls/?c=3797160144490781

Hello this my first post so I wanted you guys to take a look at my build for the upcoming DLC and Arena, I'm on 360 so I cant wait but I would like some feedback I have done really good with this build having 22-6 record so far and my losses have come at 2 vs 1 and gankers I think only 2 have been 1 on 1 losses and even those where Vs housewifes so yeah I feel really good going in but I really want to know what you guys think.

Welcome to the forums

Nice build, good poise, decent health, good weapon. an all round good build
Mabey a little bit cookie cutter is the only thing but that isn't a problem by any standard

i think you might be spreading yorself too thin there but if you feel comfortable with it you can do well with any build, this is what i would do http://tinyurl.com/8tt9bq5 the comp bow is there instead of magic and more ar for the clay or any quality weapon you wanna use.

How is that to thin?
Pyro/Faith builds are extemely effective

You have zero range since your using both a canvas and talisman, and not incorporating a bow or perhaps a spear. Health is low imo, you have 5 extra poise units over a major poise breaking point (53) so you can reroll your amour and prehaps take points out of End and then put them back into Vit for instance, thus increasing health.

Also buff builds are risky since dodging is easy.

http://tinyurl.com/9efrerb my adjustments.
http://tinyurl.com/9njtkc5 or this, if you don't plan on using anything that requires dex ever.

LOL, rant and his wooden shield. But, I do agree with him. You are spreading out too thin. Can't do that well at SL 100.

http://tinyurl.com/8sfps58

this stat arrangement gets more damage out of the claymore when 2h'ed

Most of you are saying I should use the bow but I just think thanks to Some guy everyone is trying to do just that plus it does not really fit my play style which is more in your face lol.

if you really like your build then dont change it, these are just suggestions which you asked for. but if you really like your build then you should definately do what amos did for max damage output.

RantFromRant wrote:if you really like your build then dont change it, these are just suggestions which you asked for. but if you really like your build then you should definately do what amos did for max damage output.

Dont get me wrong Im going to test some of the suggestions but I just dont think the bow will work good for my style of play.

I hate to say it but im going to have to agree with rants last post, or at least part of it anyway

This is your build, dont let any of us tell you what you should or shouldn't do with it. Sure take our advice but at the end of the day it still comes back to you

The way we play is what defines us in pvp. e.g FruitPunchNinja favours higher HP and a bit of tanking while I care less about that and favour better movesets, speed and damage.
Basicly what im saying is do what your good with, if you want to rock up with a titanite catch pole (just naming an uncommon weapon) sure people might laugh at you but that will stop really quickly when you beat them.

Wow that was an odd speach, Thank for listening anyway