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    Post by Mr. Tart Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:39 pm

    This here topic was an idea i came up with while reading ChizFreaks poem(kind of), which you should by the way check out below:

    https://soulswiki.forumotion.com/t13889-fog-dreamer-kind-of-poem-by-me

    If you're too lazy it's quoted below as well:

    REFRESHED POEM BY ChizFreak
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    Keep in mind that one is not mine, but ChizFreaks!

    Anyhow, lets just get to the point, which is simple. Post and share your poems. It's all in good fun. Got something dramatic? Cool. Something funny? Cool. Something that's not a poem? GTFO!

    Hope there's people interested in poems. tongue


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    Post by ChizFreak Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:42 pm

    Mr. Tart wrote:

    Hope there's people interested in poems. tongue

    We will find out soon enough I guess.
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:44 pm

    I have great interest in poems. Sadly, poems don't seem to have great interest in me. silly

    Seriously, though, I cannot write poetry to save my life, reading a nice poem, however, is always enjoyable. happy
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    Post by Mr. Tart Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:48 pm

    WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:I have great interest in poems. Sadly, poems don't seem to have great interest in me. silly

    Seriously, though, I cannot write poetry to save my life, reading a nice poem, however, is always enjoyable. happy

    How about if i post one of my own, you will give it a try? happy

    If you're having a hard time, just spend some time to think about what you like/hate. Something that gets the blood flowing, and just let the words shout! Give out a roar! SCREAM! SCREEAM! Sorry, kinda lost it. Shrug

    Point is, of course, writing a poem is not hard, but you need the inspiration obviously. It's always easier to write one when aim at one certain thing only. For example, bullying maybe? If you were bullied as a kid, or possibly even now, all you could do is describe your experience in a well versed text. tongue
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    Post by Tolvo Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:49 pm

    I wonder if poetic prose counts.
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    Post by Mr. Tart Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:52 pm

    Oh, of course. Post whatever you like as long as it is somewhat similar to poems at the very least. Being poetic is of course enough. Joy
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:53 pm

    Of course, we still have the Museum of Souls, which does, in many ways, perform a function parallel to this thread.
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    Post by ChizFreak Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:53 pm

    WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:I have great interest in poems. Sadly, poems don't seem to have great interest in me. silly

    Seriously, though, I cannot write poetry to save my life, reading a nice poem, however, is always enjoyable. happy

    Nice to see some interest, just to let you and everyone else know, if you have any feedback about my kind-of poem, PM it to me, or post it in my thread. I would like to write more, and it would be nice to know what people think about them.

    @Tolvo, I have no idea what "prose" means (and Google is not helping), but if it's poetic it doesn't matter the format.

    PS: Where's your Avatar from? It reminds me of Magic: The Gathering for some reason.
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    Post by Tolvo Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:57 pm

    It's an alien from Star Wars, Nom Anor. Master of propaganda.

    The simplest way to put it, Prose is poetry without Rhythm. Or it could be considered nontraditional poetry.
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:58 pm

    Prose is just standard writing. No scheme, no rhyme - just words.
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    Post by GrinTwist Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:58 pm

    I actually do have a bit of an interest in poems.

    I might come back tomorrow and post one but as of now I have a sandwich reserved for me in the Off-topic section.
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    Post by JohnnyHarpoon Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:04 pm

    I didn't write this, but a friend of mine did and it always really impressed me, especially as I never suspected him the deep thinker. It is actually a haiku:

    It's the best of times
    A highly mechanized world
    It's the worst of times
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    Post by Tolvo Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:07 pm

    This is one of my few works that can be posted on this site.

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    Post by skarekrow13 Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:15 pm

    Excellent as always Tolvo
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    Post by Tolvo Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:21 pm

    Thank you, so far I like everything that has been posted in the thread.

    I wonder if I could perhaps post my more vulgar stories under an "Artistic" license.
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    Post by skarekrow13 Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:24 pm

    I'm fine with that big grin
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    Post by Mr. Tart Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:25 pm

    Well, as the OP i guess my thought is what counts the most? So, yes, unless it goes against the forums guidelines?

    I'd like to see anything though, whether vulgar or not.

    Perhaps a child advisor or something like that would be adviced just in case? Idk. Still. Anything posted, i look forward to. silly
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    Post by Tolvo Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:27 pm

    Below, adult content. Also this is one work of mine I'm really regretful about. I feel the last two lines are terrible.

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    Post by Tolvo Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:47 pm

    I take it a story about child **** doesn't sit well?
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    Post by Mr. Tart Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:49 pm

    It's all in a poetical purpose, right? Shrug
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    Post by Tolvo Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:52 pm

    Yes, it's actually based on a reoccurring nightmare from when I was a child.
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    Post by Mr. Tart Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:54 pm

    If that's the case i'd just say it's even better for this topic. My personal opinion on music, poems and pretty much any kind of art is that, whatever is personal is of more value. And i do not say this with an intent to offend anyone, but i can, myself, enjoy anything artistic all the more if it's personal.

    I myself wish to become a musician. Mainly a singer, and i value the text the most in music. Though i'm not trying to tell my life story here or anything. Just wanted to explain myself. Anyhow, that was a great poem as well!
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    Post by ChizFreak Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:59 pm

    Mr. Tart wrote:If that's the case i'd just say it's even better for this topic. My personal opinion on music, poems and pretty much any kind of art is that, whatever is personal is of more value. And i do not say this with an intent to offend anyone, but i can, myself, enjoy anything artistic all the more if it's personal.

    I myself wish to become a musician. Mainly a singer, and i value the text the most in music. Though i'm not trying to tell my life story here or anything. Just wanted to explain myself. Anyhow, that was a great poem as well!

    Maybe we can work together some time? I'm a musician, but my voice sucks. so maybe we can complement each other? We would have to talk about music influences and such. I have no problem though, I love talking about music. Also we both write, so, that's a plus big grin


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    Post by Mr. Tart Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:00 am

    I'm afraid i would never dare do such thing. I'm shy. My curse. I honestly can hardly speak infront of my class, it's just way too hard. So i don't think that would occur anytime soon sadly, as much as i would like to do something like that.
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    Post by Hatsune Miku Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:04 am

    I used to write poems when I was depressed, in this goth phase of my life. It was bloody horrible.

    Man, am I glad I got to feeling better about things and even myself.

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