would this be viable for pvp?

http://mugenmonkey.com/darksouls/?b=YmFuZGl0LDY1LDE0LDUwLDI0LDEzLDExLDgsMTIsMCw0LDQsNCw0LDMsMzEsMTYxLDQ5LDEyNCwxMTQsbm9ybWFsLGxpZ2h0bmluZyxub3JtYWwsbm9ybWFsLDAsNzEsMzAsNDcsMCwwLDAsMCwwLDAsMCwwLDAsMCx3b29kZW4sd29vZGVuLHdvb2Rlbix3b29kZW4sMSwwLDA=

i never had another character than mage or dex/pyros.
so im not good in making anything else. hopefully u guys can tell me if its good, or give me some pointers to make it good. fast roll is a must. since i cant play with mid roll.
thx in advance from a serious ds noob

That's so many points into Vitality, if you want that much health you can swap out your Elite Knight Helm for a MoM and bring your Vitality down to 48 (saves you 17 levels) for pretty much the same health score.

Other than that, I don't like Heal too much for PvP (unless you want to fight in the arena) and I would suggest you also make a Chaos Server so you have another option in case your opponent has high lightning defenses.

if i use mask, and save 17 lvls, where should i put them? sorry for beeing such a noob =P

If you're willing to drop the Server and get say instead a Large Club, you can take away the points from DEX and put them to Strength and a few to Intelligence (15 for GMW) and I think you'll get a much more damaging build.

EDIT: Something like this roughly... http://mugenmonkey.com/darksouls/?c=177641850894867296

would the gmw do any good with such low int?

It always helps. Of course it's no CMW coming off a TCC with 50 Intelligence, but it always helps.

If you use the Ivory Catalyst, which has a static 180 magic adjust, then it would be useful.

Aw... I got sniped. Dangit pendant.

thx for the input so far. would this be better?
http://mugenmonkey.com/darksouls/?b=cHlyb21hbmNlciw0NSwxMyw1MCw0NSw5LDEyLDI1LDgsMCw1OSwzNywyNCw0LDMsMzEsMTYxLDc4LDAsMTE4LG5vcm1hbCxub3JtYWwsbm9ybWFsLG5vcm1hbCwwLDEwLDIxLDAsMCwwLDAsMCwwLDAsMCwwLDAsMCx3b29kZW4sd29vZGVuLHdvb2Rlbix3b29kZW4sMSwwLDA=

Yeah I would stop vitt at 50. At 50 with RoFaP you will have 1800 hp which is more than enough. And also as far as I know GMW is a static value, cant recall what it was.