Kirito The Black Swordman Cosplay build (Mostly intended for PVE)

I just made this build for fun as I just finished watching SAO, what do you guys think? This


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I went 40/40 Str/Dex because both weapons seems to benefit of that(though Silver Knight Straight Sword has E scaling on Str) should I lower str and increase Endurance? I could decrease Str to the bare minimum (16)and Vitalty to 38, which would allow me to have 74 endurance and have fast roll with 61 Poise.

Anything else that could help me?

That pic does looks pretty cool, I think I'll use it, thanks.

The theme is good, but you should prepare yourself to die alot. You're pretty fragile.

Do you mean in PVP (which I already do, I don't think I've been able to kill an invader by myself) or in PVE?

I'm thinking to switch the Darksword for a Queelag's furysword, while I loose some accuracy on the cosplay I do gain the ability to parry which I feel will be invaluable. What do you think?

Why Black Flame, if I may ask? In his black swordsman incarnation he has no magic, and in his Spriggan incarnation all he ever uses is smokescreen magic (well...except that one time he turned himself into a monster using illusion magic, but that's harder to replicate in Dark Souls). I can appreciate effectiveness vs authenticity, but it seems to me going with Poison/Acid Cloud would be closer to the smokescreen effects he actually uses in the show.

Effectiveness mostly, I know I said it is intended for PVE; but I wanted some pvp efficiency for the inevitable times I'll get invaded.