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    Post by DoughGuy Sat Jun 23, 2012 10:11 pm

    So many of you will have seen variosu quotes and conversation featuring my newest toon Eidolas. Well I
    ve decided t owrite his story sa he has a lot of backstory. This first post will be a small introdction then I will reserve the next 5 for his story. Feel free to post after that.
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    Post by DoughGuy Sat Jun 23, 2012 10:12 pm

    Spoiler:
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    Post by DoughGuy Sat Jun 23, 2012 10:12 pm

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    Post by DoughGuy Sat Jun 23, 2012 10:13 pm

    Obligatory extra one in caseI need more spaced disguised as me sayin you are now free to post.
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    Post by DoughGuy Sat Jun 23, 2012 10:18 pm

    Right, just to clarify I have alrady spotted a few instances when I've called the commander captain. Just so you know I am interested in being told of this sort of mistake. If you spot one please post it. I am not however interested in spelling mistakes.

    Zenan naming principles - The beginning of the name may have any number of vowels in a row. After the first consonant there must be exactly 1 consonant between each vowel.
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    Post by DoughGuy Sun Jun 24, 2012 12:15 am

    Started formatting the pages so they dont look like crap. No one have any comments?
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    Post by whitechikz11 Sun Jun 24, 2012 4:50 am

    it gives me again an additional knowledge about lores. well, Gabranth would like to meet Eidolas and test their skills.
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Sun Jun 24, 2012 4:55 am

    lol you make me want to do Letos.............. nice writing too.
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    Post by DoughGuy Sun Jun 24, 2012 7:28 am

    I found him really easy to write for, unlike anything else Ive written. I should have the next part up soon. Just need to figure something out.
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Sun Jun 24, 2012 7:33 am

    Good stuff. The worst thing is that I'll write Thane Waters before I write Letos in full
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    Post by DoughGuy Sun Jun 24, 2012 7:35 am

    Didnt you have like 40 pages of Letos? How many is he going to be?
    @Chi I think Gabranth would get on well with him.
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    Post by TehInfamousAmos Sun Jun 24, 2012 7:43 am

    I may write Leoric's Lore soon - or perhaps just a prologue to him joining the B.O.B.
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    Post by DoughGuy Thu Jun 28, 2012 2:44 am

    Next page is up. Sorry for the slow updates.
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    Post by DoughGuy Fri Jun 29, 2012 9:03 am

    Since I blatantly want to bump this for more views here's a few things. You may have noticed the use "dull bits of glass" used as a term instead of something like "you lazy good for nothins". Due to the Zenan's affiliation with crystal I thought it would only be right an appropriate insult would compare them to glass, a similar material to crystal which is vastly inferior.
    There is also the eastern translator's dialogue. The disturbance in his speech which results in words often being left out is due to the difficulty of translating eastern to Zenan.
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    Post by DoughGuy Mon Jul 09, 2012 6:54 am

    I've had 2 pages written for ages I forgot to put up. They are now there, enjoy. You'll notice they have no breaks, the scene is not yet finished which is why I was reluctant to put them up before.

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