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    Post by DoughGuy Fri Oct 05, 2012 11:31 am

    Safely behind the second line the first line dropped their
    weapons and caught their breath. The
    retreat had been fast and hard in their armour.
    Coupled with the fighting the knights were already tired. Oscar had no such luxury though. As soon as the first line was safe he was out
    on the front, looking over the second line.
    He was thankful the Hand appeared to be a good tactician. He was tired and would have missed some of
    the gaps that were now covered.


    “We’re as ready as we’ll ever be.”


    Oscar turned to see the Hand approaching. The man was in his battle armour, the
    distinctive yellow cloth crown immediately drawing the eye.


    “What about the third line?”


    The Hand grimaced, “Still working on it. Some of the soldiers here are from the third
    line. Too many are lost in the archives.”


    Oscar nodded. “We’ll
    just have to hold them here then.”


    ***


    “Well said the bone hand in first supported by as many BPs as
    we can get through. The ebon hand know
    their job already. The red hand will
    stay in support, refreshing the BPs when they fall. The Darkstalkers will follow directly behind
    the bone hand and strike targets of opportunity as they see fit. The followers
    will protect the red hand and act as a reserve to reinforce the line for
    defence or to bolster an attack. Any
    questions?” Drake looked around, seeing
    only nodding heads. His plan was good
    and maximised the skills of their men. “Good
    then. We march in 10 minutes, prepare
    your soldiers.”


    The other generals moved off to their armies but Avrik
    stayed behind. Drake looked at him questionably,
    although no expression could be seen behind his helm.


    “… this is it Drake.” muttered Avrik, “Don’t die.”


    Avrik marched off leaving Drake bewildered.


    ***


    “You have the arrows?” asked Abel.


    “Yes milord. They are
    sure to do their job. But I could only
    get 10 and the targets may be too strong.”


    “If you fail Shadow, then the Stalkers will condemn you as a
    traitor.” Abel turned to Laplace, “Don’t miss.”


    ***


    The assembled army was massive, thousands of troops packed
    into the opening rooms of the archives, the crowding only made worse by
    hundreds of phantom hollows reinforcing their numbers. Dead knights stood next to assassins. Pyromancers supported necromancers. And a single sorcerer stood aloof from the
    army.


    Drake looked over the army, his army. He smiled thinking how far he had come from a
    suicidal plunge. Now he commanded the
    greatest army in Lordran. “Bone Hand,
    crush them!”


    Avrik looked upwards and called to his crows, “To the skies
    with my brothers!” A great flock of
    crows burst into the archives, a jumble of black feathers and snapping beaks. The Ebon Hand was covered by the flock, who
    lifted them high into the air, disappearing into the rafters.


    “Today we fight for freedom brothers.” hissed Abel, “Slay
    all of the god’s puppets.”


    The swarm of living, dead and incorporeal marched on the
    second line.


    ***


    The ground rumbled before the second line. Carts of books shifted on their wheels, while
    unloaded ones drifted across the aisles.
    A black shadow emerged from beyond the walls, reaching across the
    battlefield. Knight’s backed away from
    the malign presence, the room filled with the chiming of armoured men in
    motion. Cleric knights advanced on the
    shadow, their holy light pushing it back.



    The lifehunters stood stoically, dispersed among the Knights
    lines. They had been allied to this power
    in what seemed like an age past, they knew it was nothing to fear. But the Knights had not seen the full force
    of the Gravesworn before. After this
    war, they would know it.


    Oscar looked over his men, seeing their fear. He marched out in front of them, walking into
    the largest shadow emerging from where the enemy moved. The darkness cast his golden armour in an ugly
    light. The shining gold perverted into a
    dirty brown. He raised his talisman in
    defiance and a burst of light flared from it.
    The darkness shrieked and fled its light, unable to withstand his power.


    “My Noble Knights and allies!” he cried turning back to his
    men. “Our foe seeks to trick us with
    petty tricks and illusions. But these
    hold no power over us! See how it flees
    from the light? True power is measured
    in our strength of arms, and our bonds of brotherhood. Look to the man to your left, to your right,
    to your front and back. Today he is your
    brother, today you will fight for him, and die for him. When the dogs of the Gravesworn emerge we
    will give them no ground, give them no mercy.
    These dead men pervert nature and deserve nothing but true death for
    their sins. Today they have entered our
    land, and will pay the price.” He took a
    breath before going on, “Today we end their menace, the first step for Lordran’s
    true release starts today!”


    “HURUUUUUUUUUUU!”


    “Let them come.” He whispered, the knights continuing their
    chant in the background. “Let them end
    themselves.”
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    Post by DoughGuy Fri Oct 05, 2012 11:33 am

    So this week I wasnt really in a lore writing mood, so I didn't do a "proper" piece, just more lead up to keep you guys hooked silly I know I promised named toons would be coming in today, sorry but that'll definitely be in next weeks update. Hope you guys enjoy!
    Oh finally, for the ones I post in the thread, I wont be fixing them up formatting wise or doig italics. Its just too annoying on the laptop. I will be doing it for the ones in the OP though.
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Fri Oct 05, 2012 6:12 pm

    See thats how I was when tried to write the last bit of the PW war lore....
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    Post by Seth Winternight Fri Oct 05, 2012 6:57 pm

    Me like.
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Fri Oct 05, 2012 10:07 pm

    Aright dough just tell me if you want me to do any writing.
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    Post by DoughGuy Fri Oct 05, 2012 10:11 pm

    I'll probably need you and Seth to do Avrik and Simbarda respectively in a week or 2. Depends how long the second line lasts for. Thanks for the offer.
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Fri Oct 05, 2012 10:13 pm

    Im getting back into writing more and more so I can help anytime!
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    Post by DoughGuy Fri Oct 05, 2012 10:21 pm

    You could help by finishing the PW war lore winking
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Fri Oct 05, 2012 11:49 pm

    okay then!
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    Post by Seth Winternight Sat Oct 06, 2012 8:13 am

    I've already written my part and given it to you, foo!
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    Post by DoughGuy Sat Oct 06, 2012 9:05 am

    With great joy I announce Amos and his accents have signed up to record to audio book of the lore!
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    Post by Seth Winternight Sat Oct 06, 2012 9:48 am

    THAT'S awesome! big grin We'll have a nice collaboration going.
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Sat Oct 06, 2012 6:25 pm

    Oh my god his voise sent shivers down my spine.

    We sell that to middle aged working women.....we would make millions and corner the audio porn market!
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    Post by TehInfamousAmos Sat Oct 06, 2012 6:26 pm

    Haha, get me to read 50 shades of grey for women - that will give them a reason to get wet lol
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    Post by cloudyeki Sat Oct 06, 2012 6:27 pm

    lol!
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Sat Oct 06, 2012 6:29 pm

    TehInfamousAmos wrote:Haha, get me to read 50 shades of grey for women - that will give them a reason to get wet lol

    PATENT PENDING PATENT PENDING!

    I mean I have this terrible book for you to read....toegether we will turn it into ART!
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    Post by DoughGuy Wed Oct 17, 2012 7:40 pm

    I swear Ill get a [piece done today or tomorrow!
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    Post by Spurgun Thu Oct 18, 2012 5:28 pm

    Get the lore done for one war first before you start the next one Dough.
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    Post by DoughGuy Thu Oct 18, 2012 7:51 pm

    haha good point.
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:08 pm

    NOW HOW DOES IT FEEL!?! I DONT SEE YOUR LORE DONE EITHER!
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    Post by DoughGuy Thu Oct 18, 2012 10:43 pm

    From the passages of the archives a sea of black erupted. A tidal wave of phantom energy rushed towards
    the knight’s line, and the wave crashed down onto the cliff of shields. Phantoms died in droves as spear and sword clove
    their insubstantial flesh as the wave broke upon the cliff. Black smoke wreathed the field of battle, the
    remnants of the phantoms haunting the knights even after their bodies were
    destroyed as their spirits hungered for death.
    The sound of a sea breeze blew through the archives as the wisps were
    cast down, dissipating into the air. And
    then the sea gave way to wall of iron.
    Wall and cliff crunched together in a cacophony of screeching
    metal. Men were trampled and the dead
    were flattened as the tide of battle surged back and forth. One side roared in their will to fight, the
    other with dead lips.


    In the centre of the war 2 titans met again. Gabranth in his
    while rock armour, heaving Judgement through
    even the toughest armour, while Drake split bone and flesh with halberd. The 2 fought towards each other, a saga of battle
    that lusted for its ending.


    Across the field of battle Oscar led the Dragonslayers into the
    melee. Spears slashed and thrust,
    piercing joints and taking limbs. The cumbersome
    dead knights could not match the speed and ferocity of the slayers. Oscar revelled in the fight, dancing around
    his targets, hacking and slashing before they could respond. His slayers worked in harmony with each
    other, cutting openings and protecting their backs. The weariness in his limbs faded as
    adrenaline raced through his body and he let himself become lost in the thrill
    of battle, trusting the Hand to direct the battle. Above them the Seeker’s turned their magic to
    the battle. Soul mass and soul spear
    rained down onto the enemy. Sorcery
    burst among their ranks, wrecking armour and wilting dead flesh.


    Bursts of holy light blinded the dead as the paladins poured
    their energy into the fray. The dead reeled
    back from their light, desperately covering their eyes. Until the darkness began to claw its way back. The Red Hand emerged, their own magic free
    from the drain of the phantom life, turned towards the knight’s mages. Waves of poison and toxic gas swept through
    the battle, driven by new winds. Up
    above swords of orange light burst around the sages, eviscerating the slow and knocking
    away the fast. The medics were forced to turn to healing, and
    the light was weakened.


    On the flanks the most bitter battle was fought. Lifehunter’s struck down Gravesworn, and the
    dead added to their ranks with each clash of blades. Dragons tore their foes apart with claws,
    pyromancers burnt the dead from inside
    their armour. Yet even as they did so, the
    dead knights waged through their ranks unstoppable. Nevyn had never seen such ferocity from
    either side as he watched a fellow dragon leap upon a knight and tear its throat
    out before filling its skull with breathfire.
    Yet even as the knight fell another ripped his brother off the knight
    and crushed his skull with their gauntlets.
    And that knight erupted in fire as an exile channelled his inner
    flame. Such chaos.


    ***


    Up above the tumultuous battle the shadows moved. The Ebon Hand and the Shadows of New Londo
    crawled through the rafters of the archives, watching the chaos erupt
    below. Avrik could not help but worry as
    his green eyes spotted Drake facing the titan below. Shaking his mind to clear his thoughts he
    moved his gaze to the Seekers and their leader, Andarta. They were the target. He leapt forward, landing easily on the next
    rafter. Oscar has been careless he mused, and I will punish him for it.
    He made to leap again, his knees bending into a crouch when an explosion
    rocked the rooftops. He spun around,
    eyes wide, their cover blown. “What
    happened!” he screeched. His eyes were
    immediately drawn to a portion of the rafters where a fire licked greedily at
    the wood around it. The light from the
    expanding blaze illuminated the soldiers behind him. Charred corpses surrounded the fire where a
    dozen men had died from the explosion and the inferno that followed.


    “You were careless.” A voice whispered behind him, “And know
    we will punish that.”
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    Post by DoughGuy Thu Oct 18, 2012 10:48 pm

    Ok this part represents the start of the war, where the NK showed up in force with very little opposition so its starts off one sided. As usual feel free to critique big grin
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Fri Oct 19, 2012 12:21 am

    Well done!
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    Post by DoughGuy Tue Oct 23, 2012 7:44 pm

    I have to apologise to everyone. Due to exams I wont be able to do an update this week, and nedxt week doesnt look too good either (although I may be able to squeeze that one in)
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    Post by Seth Winternight Wed Oct 24, 2012 5:15 am

    It is alright dough. I'll write my lore in a separate thread that goes along with the main thread

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