We really need a lot more Dark souls fanfiction. Still waiting for a Priscilla one. But regarding the poll, I would say Artorias Origins. Don't forget to talk about his "relationship" with Ciaran :x for some character depth.
I don't write yaoi cause i'm straight. anyways, another question, should i write in Dark Souls style speech like 'Thy' and 'Thou art', or modern english? I was considering using both depending on the characters
actually, come to think of it, most of the language spoken in game is not very old English, no? The crestfallen knight uses little to no old English, if anything, it is language that uses no slang or coarse words what so ever (except 'Bloody Hell'), so i think I'll use modern English, just give it a very old feel to it, and occasionally use words like 'Thou' and 'Thy' for formal uses. how does that sound?
EDIT: The only heavy users i can think of are the people in nobility and the knights.
ah yes, who could forget fluffy wuffy Priscilla? But still, its not heavy enough so you can't understand her, i could understand her perfectly when i first met her. Thats the kind of tone i want, old English, but not to the point where no one can read the damn thing.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9326136/1/The-Origins-of-Artorias (thar be the link)
I want to hear your reviews on it, improvements, changes you'd like to see etc etc. You can review on the website or here, I don't mind. I'll keep the poll open, however, because if i get enough votes, I'll consider doing the other story. Enjoy!
EDIT: I'll be posting new chapters either on Fridays or Saturdays, sometimes earlier, sometimes later
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I like it so far. I 've always felt that Artorias and Orienstien would have a friendly or competitive rivaly. (The way i looked at orienstien was more of a loyal but **** and hot-blooded ally while Artorias was the calm collective type.) But this definitely works too. keep it up.
Thanks for the praise Cris! To me, I always viewed Arty as the hot headed, I don't know why though, it sort of fitted him, Ornstein being the 'leader' of the four, so he would need the calm head. Anyway, thank you again for the praise!