Writing a FanFic need help deciding

OK, so basically I'm writing a Fan Fic about Artorias, but I'm not sure what topic to do it on.
It's either between;

1. Artorias is reborn into the chosen undead, and must fulfill his mission.
2. Artorias talks about his origins, and the time before Gwyn linked the fire.

Both either way will have all the knights appearing.

pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease do this!

Make sure it's good too! I REALLY want to read about him!

Which one?

We really need a lot more Dark souls fanfiction. Still waiting for a Priscilla one. But regarding the poll, I would say Artorias Origins. Don't forget to talk about his "relationship" with Ciaran :x for some character depth.

Number 2!

voted number 1

Artorias is kinda badass

Oh god no, please keep it T. We have enough smut as it is.

I don't write yaoi cause i'm straight. anyways, another question, should i write in Dark Souls style speech like 'Thy' and 'Thou art', or modern english? I was considering using both depending on the characters

Shakespearean language for the win!. Seriously though, I would prefer "Ye Olde Text" as opposed to modern English. Remember, this game's plot is created in a medieval setting, Go for it!.

It's going to be a toughy, but i'm going for it in old english, bearing in mind it won't be released in a while, i really want to get this right.

Skim through Romeo and Juliet, you'll become an Old English master in no time at all!.

actually, come to think of it, most of the language spoken in game is not very old English, no? The crestfallen knight uses little to no old English, if anything, it is language that uses no slang or coarse words what so ever (except 'Bloody Hell'), so i think I'll use modern English, just give it a very old feel to it, and occasionally use words like 'Thou' and 'Thy' for formal uses. how does that sound?

EDIT: The only heavy users i can think of are the people in nobility and the knights.

Priscilla, more old english than the game ever needs.

ah yes, who could forget fluffy wuffy Priscilla? But still, its not heavy enough so you can't understand her, i could understand her perfectly when i first met her. Thats the kind of tone i want, old English, but not to the point where no one can read the damn thing.

You mean Old English without the accent ? yes that would be best, although this is supposed to be a fanfic, so no accent needed.Also Alvina, she speaks old English as well.

accents as in these? (ǽ) no i wont be using them, to over complicated, it'll annoy people.

Friends! It has begun! My fan fic!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9326136/1/The-Origins-of-Artorias (thar be the link)

I want to hear your reviews on it, improvements, changes you'd like to see etc etc. You can review on the website or here, I don't mind. I'll keep the poll open, however, because if i get enough votes, I'll consider doing the other story. Enjoy!

EDIT: I'll be posting new chapters either on Fridays or Saturdays, sometimes earlier, sometimes later

I like it so far. I 've always felt that Artorias and Orienstien would have a friendly or competitive rivaly. (The way i looked at orienstien was more of a loyal but **** and hot-blooded ally while Artorias was the calm collective type.) But this definitely works too. keep it up.

Thanks for the praise Cris! To me, I always viewed Arty as the hot headed, I don't know why though, it sort of fitted him, Ornstein being the 'leader' of the four, so he would need the calm head. Anyway, thank you again for the praise!

Chapter 2 is up. (excluding the clarification and the prologue, other wise, its chapter 4)