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    Post by EarthScraper Fri May 24, 2013 1:12 pm

    OK, so basically I'm writing a Fan Fic about Artorias, but I'm not sure what topic to do it on.
    It's either between;

    1. Artorias is reborn into the chosen undead, and must fulfill his mission.
    2. Artorias talks about his origins, and the time before Gwyn linked the fire.

    Both either way will have all the knights appearing.
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    Post by LunarFog Fri May 24, 2013 1:51 pm

    pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease do this!

    Make sure it's good too! I REALLY want to read about him!
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    Post by EarthScraper Fri May 24, 2013 2:09 pm

    Which one?
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    Post by FireproofFlame Fri May 24, 2013 2:14 pm

    We really need a lot more Dark souls fanfiction. Still waiting for a Priscilla one. waiting But regarding the poll, I would say Artorias Origins. Don't forget to talk about his "relationship" with Ciaran :x for some character depth.
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    Post by LunarFog Fri May 24, 2013 2:17 pm

    Number 2!
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    Post by Daft Punk Fri May 24, 2013 2:24 pm

    voted number 1

    Artorias is kinda badass


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    Post by ResIsBestStat Fri May 24, 2013 2:54 pm

    Omg fanfic writers, now is mah chance
    write lot of yaoi, make artorias love gough
    just kidding, i suggest artorias origins, but i agree that the artorias chosen undead idea is a creative one
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    Post by FireproofFlame Fri May 24, 2013 2:56 pm

    Oh god no, please keep it T. We have enough smut as it is. surprised
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    Post by EarthScraper Fri May 24, 2013 2:59 pm

    I don't write yaoi cause i'm straight. anyways, another question, should i write in Dark Souls style speech like 'Thy' and 'Thou art', or modern english? I was considering using both depending on the characters
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    Post by FireproofFlame Fri May 24, 2013 3:02 pm

    Shakespearean language for the win!. Seriously though, I would prefer "Ye Olde Text" as opposed to modern English. Remember, this game's plot is created in a medieval setting, Go for it!. thumbs up
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    Post by EarthScraper Fri May 24, 2013 3:04 pm

    It's going to be a toughy, but i'm going for it in old english, bearing in mind it won't be released in a while, i really want to get this right.
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    Post by FireproofFlame Fri May 24, 2013 3:06 pm

    Skim through Romeo and Juliet, you'll become an Old English master in no time at all!. winking
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    Post by EarthScraper Fri May 24, 2013 3:12 pm

    actually, come to think of it, most of the language spoken in game is not very old English, no? The crestfallen knight uses little to no old English, if anything, it is language that uses no slang or coarse words what so ever (except 'Bloody Hell'), so i think I'll use modern English, just give it a very old feel to it, and occasionally use words like 'Thou' and 'Thy' for formal uses. how does that sound?

    EDIT: The only heavy users i can think of are the people in nobility and the knights.
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    Post by FireproofFlame Fri May 24, 2013 3:20 pm

    Priscilla, more old english than the game ever needs.
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    Post by EarthScraper Fri May 24, 2013 3:35 pm

    ah yes, who could forget fluffy wuffy Priscilla? But still, its not heavy enough so you can't understand her, i could understand her perfectly when i first met her. Thats the kind of tone i want, old English, but not to the point where no one can read the damn thing.
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    Post by FireproofFlame Fri May 24, 2013 3:54 pm

    You mean Old English without the accent ? yes that would be best, although this is supposed to be a fanfic, so no accent needed.Also Alvina, she speaks old English as well.
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    Post by EarthScraper Fri May 24, 2013 5:15 pm

    accents as in these? (ǽ) no i wont be using them, to over complicated, it'll annoy people.
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    Post by EarthScraper Sat May 25, 2013 4:20 pm

    Friends! It has begun! My fan fic!

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9326136/1/The-Origins-of-Artorias (thar be the link)

    I want to hear your reviews on it, improvements, changes you'd like to see etc etc. You can review on the website or here, I don't mind. I'll keep the poll open, however, because if i get enough votes, I'll consider doing the other story. Enjoy!

    EDIT: I'll be posting new chapters either on Fridays or Saturdays, sometimes earlier, sometimes later


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    Post by Cris the lighthearted Mon May 27, 2013 6:32 am

    I like it so far. I 've always felt that Artorias and Orienstien would have a friendly or competitive rivaly. (The way i looked at orienstien was more of a loyal but **** and hot-blooded ally while Artorias was the calm collective type.) But this definitely works too. keep it up. Writing a FanFic need help deciding 558843162
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    Post by EarthScraper Mon May 27, 2013 6:49 pm

    Thanks for the praise Cris! To me, I always viewed Arty as the hot headed, I don't know why though, it sort of fitted him, Ornstein being the 'leader' of the four, so he would need the calm head. Anyway, thank you again for the praise!
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    Post by EarthScraper Sun Jun 02, 2013 8:04 am

    Chapter 2 is up. (excluding the clarification and the prologue, other wise, its chapter 4)

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