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    Post by mugenis4real Mon May 07, 2012 9:49 pm

    To get straight to the point it's a war between Angels and Dragons. The problem is that I already have my "elder" angels, who are the angels referenced in Christianity and Judaism as the 7 ArchAngels, but I don't really have any inspiration for "elder" Dragons.

    Pictures, Music, Art, Movies, anything goes I'm just looking for stuff that really has that ancient dragon feel to it. Need to get the creative juices flowing.

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    Post by DoughGuy Mon May 07, 2012 9:59 pm

    bahamut and Tiamat.
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    Post by Serious_Much Mon May 07, 2012 10:02 pm

    Use dragons of elements perhaps? Remember they need not be of the same number even.

    However.. inspiration for dragons.. you could play Skyrim, that's a tutorial of how NOT to make dragons for you happy
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    Post by KomradDakka Mon May 07, 2012 10:16 pm

    Serious_Much wrote:Use dragons of elements perhaps? Remember they need not be of the same number even.

    However.. inspiration for dragons.. you could play Skyrim, that's a tutorial of how NOT to make dragons for you happy

    I liked the lore for the dragons... sad
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    Post by Serious_Much Mon May 07, 2012 10:20 pm

    I felt the idea of a single leader of them... who could resurrect them stretched an already thin premise too far.

    I prefer a barbaric image of Dragons, creatures of pure destruction, perhaps as a punishment upon man. However this is obviously going away from his story idea silly

    I think a council, or simple an unofficial group of revered dragons who act as leaders without actually being so is a better idea.
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    Post by mugenis4real Mon May 07, 2012 10:27 pm

    I'm thinking that having 3-4 Elder Dragons would be best because in some respects they are going to be more powerful than the ArchAngels. Dragons are intelligent creatures and furious engines of destruction. There will of course be other dragons but I want the Elder Dragons to portray something super powerful. Like they have been around longer than any remember.
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    Post by DoughGuy Mon May 07, 2012 10:45 pm

    Alduruun, Bahamut and Tiamat. That's 3 elder dragons (I think I spelt the first one wrong).
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    Post by User Mon May 07, 2012 10:50 pm

    Here is an idea, although he is more of a giant serpent than a dragon.

    The Leviathan. A creature that use to exist, which after death lead him to turning into a Demon of Envy (cause of the lost of his equivilant mate by God himself... ya).

    Might be an idea for ya. Although it is now Demon more than serpent...
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    Post by Maneater_Mildred Mon May 07, 2012 10:54 pm

    7 angels vs 7 deadly sins dragons(each dragon is a sin)
    Or with 4 dragons, each dragon could be based off the 4 horsemen.

    Not sure if it will fit with what you are looking at doing but hey just a idea that i had.
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    Post by skarekrow13 Mon May 07, 2012 11:19 pm

    Quetzalcoatl and Jormungandr would be good additions for elder creatures. Neither is strictly a dragon in the usual sense but they could easily fit into lore. Such as, they are dragons but the only depictions of them are inaccurate as a result of few survivors from encounters
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Tue May 08, 2012 1:58 am

    people sure like angels and christian religious iconography aroun here. Could you PM me a small blurb or something. I'm very interested to see how other people write/ develop thier ideas, being an aspiring career writer myself.
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    Post by Azran Tue May 08, 2012 3:31 am

    Ever heard of the Dragons in the Iron Kingdoms? It's Privateer Press lore setting for their wargames, Warmachine and Hordes.

    Basically: There was a dragon once, named Toruk, who was basically a god in physical form. He grew tired of being so powerful but alone, so he splitted his athanc (the souls of dragons are like big, big crystals) into many shards, keeping just a portion for himself. The shards became minor dragons, who were as proud and arrogant as he was. So they declared war on him. And the history goes on.

    But! The important thing is: Dragons in the Iron Kingdoms are abominations. Unnatural aberrations. Pisacas ain't got crap on the Iron Kingdoms' Dragons. Their very presence corrupts the fabric of reality and all living things, and from their blood spawn monsters full of cruelty but without eyes.
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    Post by DoughGuy Tue May 08, 2012 3:33 am

    Shiva, Ifrit, Ramuh and Fenris. Ice, fire, lightning and earth.
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    Post by Azran Tue May 08, 2012 5:41 am

    DoughGuy wrote:Shiva, Ifrit, Ramuh and Fenris. Ice, fire, lightning and earth.

    Add Ma-Ti with the power of the Heart and together they will form...

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    Post by Quarik Tue May 08, 2012 5:49 am

    Glaurung and Ancalagon, respectively the first dragon and the first winged dragon in The Silmarillion.
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    Post by Serious_Much Tue May 08, 2012 8:21 am

    I love the way you're all giving him non-original ideas for the dragons, when those are the ones he gets to make up and be creative with (considering the arch angels all have predetermined names)
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    Post by DoughGuy Tue May 08, 2012 8:22 am

    He didnt neccesarily ask for new names. he asked for inspiration to get the "creative juices flowing".
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    Post by Serious_Much Tue May 08, 2012 8:26 am

    I wasn't talking about names with the dragons.. It's just the dragons is where he can create new ideas as the arch angels as a concept already exist, but just feeding him already used concepts will detract from the result i think.
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    Post by DoughGuy Tue May 08, 2012 8:32 am

    So stuff more lik - http://drakhenliche.deviantart.com/art/Elder-Dragon-Rising-68348832 and http://www.tentonhammer.com/image/view/87939
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    Post by Tolvo Tue May 08, 2012 8:56 am

    You could always make the dragon's *** nuts if you want to really say "Screw you" to the traditional view of them.

    Six legs that each split at the elbow and form into twelve limbs. On is hooked while the other is a growth for helping position. Long whip like tails covered in barbs, a thick body but then a massive serpent like neck, and a long needle nose face with twenty eyes littered about. Ten massive wings starting from its neck all the way onto its tail, and sores on its belly that it uses to secrete excrement. A long tongue like a hummingbird that pierces soft tissue and drains it of bodily liquids. Two vestigial arms that hug close underneath its belly, that's only use is to help move eggs now.

    That's about all I can come up with in ten seconds, I didn't want to drag on and on.
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    Post by mugenis4real Tue May 08, 2012 11:30 am

    DoughGuy wrote:So stuff more lik - http://drakhenliche.deviantart.com/art/Elder-Dragon-Rising-68348832 and http://www.tentonhammer.com/image/view/87939

    Yes! This is wonderful, I need stuff like this happy
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    Post by skarekrow13 Tue May 08, 2012 11:57 am

    Tolvo, why not a dragon with one big muscley arm sticking out of his neck?
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    Post by Serious_Much Tue May 08, 2012 1:37 pm

    skarekrow13 wrote:Tolvo, why not a dragon with one big muscley arm sticking out of his neck?

    don't forget the PUNY HUMAN!!! legs silly

    On a second note if I had a pet, s/he would be called trogdor for sure lol!
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    Post by ViralEnsign_ Tue May 08, 2012 4:38 pm

    I dont like Dragons in my stories. Why not, insteada having a unified race of dragons, combne all existing serpentine creatures into a massive horde like grouping. I.e while you have Drakes, and Dragons, and Wyrms (who cant fly), and Leviathan, and etc they all constitute dragons for the purposes of this story.

    Are the Angels the good guys or the bad guys? Or are both sides somewhere in the grey?
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    Post by Serious_Much Tue May 08, 2012 6:10 pm

    sshhhh thats the twist!

    You'll ruin it for everybody. silly

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