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This shall be our finest hour: Painted World Invasion
DoughGuy- Duke's Archivist
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I should at least have a start on Wyrm's lore by tonight too. However it will be competing with Dragon's Dogma.
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Any good?
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Still on the train. Bout 30min till I start playing.
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Just abou tot start playing! I alrady love the music.
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I wrote this thinking Wyrm’s toon is a male then realise it’s
actually a female. Also its not as good
as I would like but Dragon’s Dogma is calling. As such if anyone wants to improve upon this please do.
actually a female. Also its not as good
as I would like but Dragon’s Dogma is calling. As such if anyone wants to improve upon this please do.
- Spoiler:
- I have finally arrived.
The painted world, land of exiles.
Banished from thorolund for “my occult” ways, the weaklings. They can’t recognise the power I hold. They can’t understand the need for
change. But I’ll show them. I’ll start anew here ... with my ember.
I saw the queen today.
I was in the annex. I had found a
blacksmith that could use my ember to forge weapons to use against my
foes. I glanced out a window and .. just
caught a single glimpse .. but I’m in love.
The blacksmith stood their knowingly as I stared after her. Now I understand these people, how they can
bear to live here, to serve in this frozen wasteland. And I know why I was drawn here. Revenge can wait.
I went to see the queen today to pledge my allegiance to
her. But I was blocked by a man named Etraiu. He considers himself her guard and protector. We argued for hours until we both realised
how deeply we felt for the queen. I like
the man deeply and I can see him having his place in my hunters.
I travelled the painted world today. Collecting all those with enough sanity to
think straight into my band. Etraiu has
already started using his heavy handed bluntness to strike fear into their
hearts. They’ll be a proper fighting
force in no time.
She came to see me today.
She simply appeared behind me while I was training the new
recruits. I stood slack jawed as she
thanked me for my dedication and asked if I would be her “hand”. I nodded dumbly as the recruits knelt about
me in prayer. From this day forward we
are not just hunters .. we are Priscilla’s Lifehunters.
Met a “man” called Siefer today. Swaggered through the painting like he owned
it. He called himself the “Hand of Nito”
and wished to make the alliance. Quite
frankly I thought he was insane, going off on wild tangents with no
meaning. I accepted his offer, thinking
at least it would make him go away. The
next day he turned up with 10 other “men”.
Right before my eyes they raised black phantoms of the crows and bloated
hollows that roam our world. I’m very
glad I did not reject his offer.
Siefer brought a new man with him today. Avrik the crow, his most trusted lieutenant. I like him much more than Siefer. Maybe I’ll arrange for the 2 to switch
positions.
Avrik visited today.
He came bearing bad news. Siefer
had gone rogue and gotten himself killed.
Now he was the new hand. Can’t
say I’m disappointed, I’ve always liked Avrik far better. He didn’t come with just that though. He brought a warning. Some upstart group of knights led by that
whoreson Oscar’s son is going round attempting to reclaim Lordran. They’ve already taken the catacombs and Avrik
needs helped. I sent some hunters with
him, they should be enough.
I cannot believe it.
Avrik dead, the gravesworn defeated and my hunters dead. I have underestimated these knights. I should have known the son would be as good
as his father. Alone that would be bad
enough but my involvement has dealt us a far greater blow. The knights know where we are, they know the
threat we represent. And they are
coming.
8 dead crossbreeds were found in their quarters today. All show sword wounds and burn marks. Those knights will pay.
Hihime was captured the other today. I told her it was too dangerous but she would
not listen. Et has been desperate to
rescue her but I have forbidden him.
This requires more planning than an attack of passion.
More corpses turned up today. I don’t know how they are getting in. I have hunters guarding the entrance yet they
continue to sneak in. My inaction is
giving them confidence. Well its about
time we got Hihime back.
That showed those upstart knights to venture into my realm. Dozens of them dead at our hands and Hihime
is with us again. They were pathetic,
screaming and running about as a bare 6 of my hunters carved a path through
them. That is just a taste of what they
will face. Even better a corpse used the
opportunity to sneak in. Avrik has returned
to repay the debt he owes us.
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^- Epic. I really like it though Dough it really does fit the persona of the painted world scenario.
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psn: Ahhotep1 sl 80 and 120...my sweet, sweet vengeance trembles with anticipation!!!
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I like it too. Especially how you mentioned Siefer again. He would swagger or so I'd imagine.
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Due to the skewed numbers I removed Viral and Shkar from the knights list. For now they will be fighting exclusivelly for the lifehunters.
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Depends on how Im feeling that day.... but odd are I will.
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New development, Nat might not be able to make it (she's sick). So you guys may have Jason for the entire day.
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MWAHAHAHAHA it worked....
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How much more lore are you doing?
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Well I'll probably do a speech or 2, maybe another of Isaac's missions and then I'll get working on what happens during the battle.
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If possible I'd like to complete Letos story and Dukes Mission, and add his section where he sets off to hunt down Lady Allant poisoners with Yvette.
As for Avrik I leave him to you....may you treat him well.
As for Avrik I leave him to you....may you treat him well.
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I'm in for the LH's... Dont see my name mentioned
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I'l need your PSN/XBL and SL.
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K.
my group (the dms) are led by etraiu and Hihime, and our branch is small and elite. Dm's are rare (lore wise) so LH dms would be more rare. As such, They are all very good, highly and individualy trained by Etraiu or Hihime. We specialise in fighting alone or in pairs against individuals or groups of enemies. In essence, we operate like special forces. In a battle, we seperate and support the more standard units, or sneak around and jump, mages, CO's, healers, you get the idea.
I'll let the others (wyrm & spur) decide the information on the other factions.
my group (the dms) are led by etraiu and Hihime, and our branch is small and elite. Dm's are rare (lore wise) so LH dms would be more rare. As such, They are all very good, highly and individualy trained by Etraiu or Hihime. We specialise in fighting alone or in pairs against individuals or groups of enemies. In essence, we operate like special forces. In a battle, we seperate and support the more standard units, or sneak around and jump, mages, CO's, healers, you get the idea.
I'll let the others (wyrm & spur) decide the information on the other factions.
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Do you want to write up a small lore bit describing them from Etriau's perspective or do you want me too? Also you should remind any hunters that havent yet applied to do so over the chat.
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I'll do it, if you don't mind.
Though A description from one of your knights would be interesting. You have focused on the dragons a bunch.
It could have affected how you wrote the lore for the actual battle and your knights encounters with them so I figured I'd bring it up.
Though A description from one of your knights would be interesting. You have focused on the dragons a bunch.
It could have affected how you wrote the lore for the actual battle and your knights encounters with them so I figured I'd bring it up.
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I've mainly wrote about the dragons because thats the focus of my knights hate, they take their most hated enemy and focus on them specifically. Based on what you said and how the knights will be engaging they'll be playing a prominent part in the battle.
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"Ser Natalia looked over her Astoran knigths training. Sword and halberd smashed against shield and mannequin, moves flowed into each other resulting in a never letting up attack. Many of these knights aspirred to become dragonslayers thus their training represented this. She looked over to the left where small groups practiced evading the large swungs of a few captured dragon weapons. Their armour provided medium protection while allowing freedom of movement. And medium protection would do nothing against these weapons. Satisfied she descended into their ranks to lend her personal experience to their training."
"Lady Mildred walked among her knights looking out for her newer knights, the less trained ones. This battle would involve well trained foes and the large weapons her countrymen favoured required experience or you would be left open. She saw Oscar's wisdom in holding them as part of the reserves. They would be best put to use against a weakened, injured foe. Stopping to help a knight who repeatedly left his left flank exposed she was glad Oscar would lead the dragonslayers in together, so that she would not miss the battle."
"Division Sergeant Reaper struck the final blow, knocking thre knight down. The Oolacilians were only a small group so he had the time to duel each personally. He had high hopes. Oscar had not given him his orders yet but had promised he would not be in the reserves. His men's solid armour and the magic of their swords would be an invaluable tool in this battle. The next knight stepped forward, Reaper quickly corrected the knight's stance before they duelled."
"Knight captains Medi and Sun overlooked their Cleric knights. They were pumped up and rady to fight. Oscar had promised them a place in the vanguard along with the other Knights of Havel and their Paladins were following in the second wave. They were spending the time oiling their armour. Rock armour was prone to catching on itself and needed oiling to prevent it locking up in combat. The allfather had sent 50 more Paladins after their victory in the Tomb and they were eager to prove they were well deserved."
"The knights Amk, Boil, Del and Chi spared together, adrenalne running high. The berenike knights would be the vanguard of the invasion and they needed to be their best. Their tower shields would form an impenetrable wall in front of the balder knights minimising losses and pushing a wedge deep into the enemy's heart. And they trained all the harder for another reason. There were no commanders of Berenike, for now the Knights of Havel commanded them. Whoever could show themselves capable could achieve a command rank and this pushed them all the harder."
"Ser Bee wandered the halls of londo alone. One of the few Carim knights with Oscar, and probably the only one who actually liked the man meant he had few friends here. But he vowed to show himself worthy of being here. The Carim knights had a vital and secret objective in the attack that was tailored to their offensive abilities that he vowed they would achieve."
"Lady Mildred walked among her knights looking out for her newer knights, the less trained ones. This battle would involve well trained foes and the large weapons her countrymen favoured required experience or you would be left open. She saw Oscar's wisdom in holding them as part of the reserves. They would be best put to use against a weakened, injured foe. Stopping to help a knight who repeatedly left his left flank exposed she was glad Oscar would lead the dragonslayers in together, so that she would not miss the battle."
"Division Sergeant Reaper struck the final blow, knocking thre knight down. The Oolacilians were only a small group so he had the time to duel each personally. He had high hopes. Oscar had not given him his orders yet but had promised he would not be in the reserves. His men's solid armour and the magic of their swords would be an invaluable tool in this battle. The next knight stepped forward, Reaper quickly corrected the knight's stance before they duelled."
"Knight captains Medi and Sun overlooked their Cleric knights. They were pumped up and rady to fight. Oscar had promised them a place in the vanguard along with the other Knights of Havel and their Paladins were following in the second wave. They were spending the time oiling their armour. Rock armour was prone to catching on itself and needed oiling to prevent it locking up in combat. The allfather had sent 50 more Paladins after their victory in the Tomb and they were eager to prove they were well deserved."
"The knights Amk, Boil, Del and Chi spared together, adrenalne running high. The berenike knights would be the vanguard of the invasion and they needed to be their best. Their tower shields would form an impenetrable wall in front of the balder knights minimising losses and pushing a wedge deep into the enemy's heart. And they trained all the harder for another reason. There were no commanders of Berenike, for now the Knights of Havel commanded them. Whoever could show themselves capable could achieve a command rank and this pushed them all the harder."
"Ser Bee wandered the halls of londo alone. One of the few Carim knights with Oscar, and probably the only one who actually liked the man meant he had few friends here. But he vowed to show himself worthy of being here. The Carim knights had a vital and secret objective in the attack that was tailored to their offensive abilities that he vowed they would achieve."
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- "The Eclipse? Every citizen of our world is as family, the Eclipse, are my comrades. We don't always get along, or even like eachother (fist fights are common), but any one would take a blade for any other. Its a special bond, one few outside the service understand, and its woven all the tighter by the small size and high risk nature of our missions. Each person must be able to trust their partner implicitly or both will die. We each have our own skill sets. I train the melee combatants, and Hihime the casters. The ambush and disguise training is joint and conducted with at least one other unit, as both stealth and counter stealth, are taught and practiced at those times. We do not train with uniformity in mind, rather, our goal in training is to discover, flesh out, and strengthen each persons natural abilities, while mitigating any weaknesses. All use deception and stealth, but we use these abilities in combat as well as ambush, having magic and hiding the ability untill that 1 cast kills the opponent, baiting a response with empty swings, then slipping by their counter and shoving a claymore through their chest, suddenly stepping in next to the opponent, then tripping them and dropping your zweihander into their face. This is stealth as well, and it is our specialty. We are not soldiers, we are assassins. A fact often forgotten by our opponents, just before they die. Like an eclipse, we bring darkness to any caught in our path."
Interview with Etraiu the Warrior on his soldiers.
Hows that? you may make suggestions/ rewrite it if you'd like.
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Its good, I'll add it.
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A little tip for the Noble Knight's. When you are fighting Priscilla with the host, bring a bow. If you shoot Priscilla while she is invisible, the arrow will stick to her and show her position! :happy: