The Lore of the Covenants

ViralEnsign_ wrote:PM it to me please. Id love to read it.

I have it hand written. Since I'm at work I couldn't type it out, but I have 3 pages in my binder filled lol. When I get a chance I'll type it up and send it to you.

So I finally figured out where Eidolas came from and why he's in Astora so Im now writing his story. Just finished the intro and nearly 3 pages. I will be posting it when I get internet on my other comp back.

NPCWhiteMage wrote:

ViralEnsign_ wrote:PM it to me please. Id love to read it.

I have it hand written. Since I'm at work I couldn't type it out, but I have 3 pages in my binder filled lol. When I get a chance I'll type it up and send it to you.

Im just like you.

I spent two full 8 hour days composing Letos tale. Nine A4 papers of planning and now 43 pages of written text later he is almost half done.

@ Dough- Odds are eh comes from Astora and is part of some noble family which he is an illegitimate member of or he is an orphan who worked his way to glory.....

Man it would be nice to surprise you but I like saying stuff. He's originally from Zena actually. I'm working him into the East vs Astora war that Oscar wins.

DoughGuy wrote:Man it would be nice to surprise you but I like saying stuff. He's originally from Zena actually. I'm working him into the East vs Astora war that Oscar wins.

Yay we have a different character! Gods above I have to ensure that when I make mine they dont cross over.

I haven't done that right?

I dont think anyones toons have clashed yet. But as we get more we might run into problems. Of course I've basically written Astoras history for them and in Eidolas's story Im basically defining Zena as a country so people might not like that.

So I have a pretty decent amount of Lore written for my Wayward Knight atm, as Viral can testify, which explains the beginning of his life in Thorolund. Next begins the journey into Lordran and beyond.

Its good stuff too. Very well written.

I should do Letos one day.... but how to constrict his tale to forum length?

ViralEnsign_ wrote:Its good stuff too. Very well written.

I should do Letos one day.... but how to constrict his tale to forum length?

Only include every sixth word?

Letos if thought went am so wear padded......

that was an amazing tale of epic proportions though I regret to inform you that Letos appears illiterate

Every sixth word really doesnt suit his style. Killing people with bastard swords and awesome kite shields is more his thing.....

Are these certain people apostates?

Dont you know it.

That is until he meets Yvette.

ViralEnsign_ wrote:Letos if thought went am so wear padded......

If it is only 48 words long I think you are good

lol Viral just make a thread not allowing anyone else to post in it. Then do one page per post. Thats what Ill be doing for Eidolas.

spoiler it?

^If a post gets too large it can actually take upwards of 15 seconds to get posted. You dont really want to have to go through that for every edit.

Man Eidolas's story is getting hard to write. I have to figure out how he turns. I have an idea but it needs more.

Totally having the same problem. Not the why but how.

Its always a toughy.

Forum Pirate wrote:Totally having the same problem. Not the why but how.

Are you trying to write up how your Lifehunter came over to us or something?

Yeah.

Some conflict over defensive versus pro active perhaps in the defense of the painted world? you disagreed with some planned action (defensive versus pro active and offensive against other factions.) and sooner than cause the lifehunters to splinter and infight you left yourself maintaining their values but unable to stay with them any longer?
(unsure how appropriate this is for your character but whatever.)

Ok, so I am compiling the Lore that I sent to Viral, and I plan on posting it once I have re-read it to make sure its somewhat grammatically sound, and then I'll post it.