My new build is...

Gallagher!
http://tinyurl.com/9xqptny

Gankers look a lot like watermelons don't they?

Truthfully, I'm running out of ideas. :|
But tell me what you think of it anyways.

Who is Gallagher?

Um, Smough's Hammer is really bad isn't it? I can't say I've even used it, its too high, but I never have a heard a good thing about it?

I would suggest, although perhaps you don't want to do this, you should consider using DWGR, and having 40 END, that would give you enough to fast roll without Havel's Ring and without Mask of the Father, you could replace Mask of the Father with one of the two better ones and go to 41 END and still handspring. You could decrease your SL down to maybe 100, which in comparison, would make it better. Or maybe some magic if you wanted to.

I assume you're trying to look and/or act like another character, so I apologize if my advice is worthless in that way.

The 2h rolling attack has a HUGE area, but that´s the only positive thing i know about smoughs hammer.

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Gallagher is a comedian who smashes watermelons...

Example of this: https://youtu.be/tbKayY6eD9k

I was pleased with that video, your build looks fine to me

lol i like it, you should drop the smith hammer since two hammers is kinda pointless. it might leave you enoughroon for med armor gloves and not get staggered by kirk's armor which is a pain in the ***.

Giant hammer for the faster move set and I've had experience with no poise.