by ViralEnsign_ Tue Aug 21, 2012 8:26 amDamn it this keeps dying and I really want this to take off. So to start it back up again im re beginning my serial Horizon
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I also have a shorter serial that is set in the distant future, and is inspired by Mass Effect and Dune, whic follows Nathan Cross on a journey across the know universe in pursuit of a deranged war criminal who is making use of a PMC to achieve his ends. Thes being to use a series of clues given by the shards of a monosect which are sent by Eos, the universal Eden, to attract the worthy to the planet. Nathan finds one of these on Padaras where he is fighting Sakarian rebels in a mixed unit (with his Noig'dallo (blood brother) Tyrial, a Sakarian) however the unit comes under attack, first by ambush, and then by heavy artillery fire which "kills" him (not real death just really badly hurst aka face shattered, limbs blown off, but still breathing). he is heal throught he use of gene regeneration surgery (illegal as stated by EAF laws) and is asked to do one last job as repayment for the help.
The data package he recived from the Monosect is keyed to his WNN signature so removing his WNN box or letting him die is unfeasible. he is tasked with tracking down the war criminal and ending his plans. Firstly he has to attend to buisness. In the 3 weeks he was out his lower Lilith Andrews was KIA on Pandaras, he attends her funeral, has to try to pull a squad out of a training mission gone wrong, and try to avoid being killed by another team which seems to be on the trail of the villain as well.
We shall see the team trapped on space station falling out of orbit only to be stuck on a planet where the madman intends of detonate a series of atomic warheads to cleanse his trail from the planet. He will meet Sarassirii, the most perfect beings in all the universe one of whom will become "intrigued" by him (not what you are thinking theres a psychological condition in all of thier race which makes them disspassionate about things, they have two sets of eyelids, thier normal ones and black ones which means they see in shades of grey untill the become intruiged) and whom will prophecise his meeting with his future love interest.
etc its fun in space.
What do you guy think to this?
EAF is the Earth Administrative Federation- they run the law making in earths solar system though the weight of such laws is much more dominant in subsectors of human controlled space.
KIA- Killed in Action
Monsect- A strange shard of unknown origin sometimes found on planets or in deep space. known to provide the first to touch it with the key to finding Eos, the eden of the Universe.
WNN- Wireless Neural Network (actually from another sci fi story Im working one called Human Agency)- In the future humans no longer need physical computers for in the field work and as such rely of neural augmentation to access the WNN kind of like a mental internet formed from the human consciousness. AKA a human consciousness forms a pillar, each pillar links to all other pillars while retaining it shape in an impossible manner, each link makes up the very fabric of this neurotechnological construct.
There is other stuff but as you've shown interest in this I'll throw down the characters as well.
Nathan Cross- Human, Educated in Several Alien Cultural Sciences, Skilled CQC fighter, point man for his mixed human Sakarian platoon (ill explain this too if you want), also skilled hacker of systems.
Tyrial Amarando Noig'dalln Cross- Sakarian tribesman, Skilled with Energy Lance, Stands eight feet tall, chitinous exoskeleton, anti tank expert.
Fex Sentorian- Sakarian hailing from Thanotos-Omega, Demolitions Maniac, stands seven and a half feet tall, skilled Mercenary.
Adys En'enthi- _______ Spec ops, engineer and analyist for the "other team" going after the war criminal, Skilled in light armament and systems repairs. Burnt badly during an ambush where Plasma weaponry was involved, Nathans love interest.
Koton- Isset Medical Specialist, recruited by Cross during his time on Thanatos, veteran of four tours of duty on Caldera during the Volk Uprising.
Mana- Ashlar sneak, Ashlar are able to phase through solid objects thoug not shields, cannot bear direct sunlight on skin photosensitive.
Maxim- Icarian pilot, runs Nathans ship the Ralya, and pilots his armoured vehicles.
Hunter- Sniper, Human, Once a big game hunter until a reunion with Nathan turned into a blood bath when slavers kidnapped his clients.
Natalia Borochev- Pilot of the Ralya's Gunships, Skilled gunners and pilot, skilled in engine maintanence, interested in Nathan.
Illyri San'tvas'Atar - Sarrasiri Councillor from Thanatos, she became 'intrigued' by Nathan and Adys when they arrive (not together Nathan arrived and left ten days before Adys even stepped foot on Thanatos) and reveals sections of Nathan's future to him. Convinces Adys ahead of time not to shoot Nathan on sight on Pylos (the soon to be nuked planet). May have slept with both Nathan and Adys they dont remember.
So.......
for those who forgot it was the
I also have a shorter serial that is set in the distant future, and is inspired by Mass Effect and Dune, whic follows Nathan Cross on a journey across the know universe in pursuit of a deranged war criminal who is making use of a PMC to achieve his ends. Thes being to use a series of clues given by the shards of a monosect which are sent by Eos, the universal Eden, to attract the worthy to the planet. Nathan finds one of these on Padaras where he is fighting Sakarian rebels in a mixed unit (with his Noig'dallo (blood brother) Tyrial, a Sakarian) however the unit comes under attack, first by ambush, and then by heavy artillery fire which "kills" him (not real death just really badly hurst aka face shattered, limbs blown off, but still breathing). he is heal throught he use of gene regeneration surgery (illegal as stated by EAF laws) and is asked to do one last job as repayment for the help.
The data package he recived from the Monosect is keyed to his WNN signature so removing his WNN box or letting him die is unfeasible. he is tasked with tracking down the war criminal and ending his plans. Firstly he has to attend to buisness. In the 3 weeks he was out his lower Lilith Andrews was KIA on Pandaras, he attends her funeral, has to try to pull a squad out of a training mission gone wrong, and try to avoid being killed by another team which seems to be on the trail of the villain as well.
We shall see the team trapped on space station falling out of orbit only to be stuck on a planet where the madman intends of detonate a series of atomic warheads to cleanse his trail from the planet. He will meet Sarassirii, the most perfect beings in all the universe one of whom will become "intrigued" by him (not what you are thinking theres a psychological condition in all of thier race which makes them disspassionate about things, they have two sets of eyelids, thier normal ones and black ones which means they see in shades of grey untill the become intruiged) and whom will prophecise his meeting with his future love interest.
etc its fun in space.
What do you guy think to this?
EAF is the Earth Administrative Federation- they run the law making in earths solar system though the weight of such laws is much more dominant in subsectors of human controlled space.
KIA- Killed in Action
Monsect- A strange shard of unknown origin sometimes found on planets or in deep space. known to provide the first to touch it with the key to finding Eos, the eden of the Universe.
WNN- Wireless Neural Network (actually from another sci fi story Im working one called Human Agency)- In the future humans no longer need physical computers for in the field work and as such rely of neural augmentation to access the WNN kind of like a mental internet formed from the human consciousness. AKA a human consciousness forms a pillar, each pillar links to all other pillars while retaining it shape in an impossible manner, each link makes up the very fabric of this neurotechnological construct.
There is other stuff but as you've shown interest in this I'll throw down the characters as well.
Nathan Cross- Human, Educated in Several Alien Cultural Sciences, Skilled CQC fighter, point man for his mixed human Sakarian platoon (ill explain this too if you want), also skilled hacker of systems.
Tyrial Amarando Noig'dalln Cross- Sakarian tribesman, Skilled with Energy Lance, Stands eight feet tall, chitinous exoskeleton, anti tank expert.
Fex Sentorian- Sakarian hailing from Thanotos-Omega, Demolitions Maniac, stands seven and a half feet tall, skilled Mercenary.
Adys En'enthi- _______ Spec ops, engineer and analyist for the "other team" going after the war criminal, Skilled in light armament and systems repairs. Burnt badly during an ambush where Plasma weaponry was involved, Nathans love interest.
Koton- Isset Medical Specialist, recruited by Cross during his time on Thanatos, veteran of four tours of duty on Caldera during the Volk Uprising.
Mana- Ashlar sneak, Ashlar are able to phase through solid objects thoug not shields, cannot bear direct sunlight on skin photosensitive.
Maxim- Icarian pilot, runs Nathans ship the Ralya, and pilots his armoured vehicles.
Hunter- Sniper, Human, Once a big game hunter until a reunion with Nathan turned into a blood bath when slavers kidnapped his clients.
Natalia Borochev- Pilot of the Ralya's Gunships, Skilled gunners and pilot, skilled in engine maintanence, interested in Nathan.
Illyri San'tvas'Atar - Sarrasiri Councillor from Thanatos, she became 'intrigued' by Nathan and Adys when they arrive (not together Nathan arrived and left ten days before Adys even stepped foot on Thanatos) and reveals sections of Nathan's future to him. Convinces Adys ahead of time not to shoot Nathan on sight on Pylos (the soon to be nuked planet). May have slept with both Nathan and Adys they dont remember.
So.......
